Kamis, 10 Maret 2016



About my family and my friends..



            We can get the best experience if your family is beside you.

I want to tell you about my family. My dad is a hardworker,. He always told me that “you must protect your mother  and your sister” because he can not  stay too long. He is my inspiration. My mother is a math teacher in Santa Maria Senior High School. I hate mathematics because I can not understand some of method, for example : Phytagoras. She is hardworker too.She is work from 7.a.m until 4.a.m. I have an older sister named Maria. She is have been working on Wismilak Industries as a secretary. Tia is my younger sister. She is in Junior High School right now. We are a happy family. Last holiday we went to Karimun Jawa island, we seen many beautiful fish there. We were so happy to have a trip together.
            Second, I want to tell you about my friends. At the University I have many new friends from everywhere ; Flores, Kalimantan, Malang or from the other faculty ; Chemical engineering, Phsycology, Business. They are so fun. Felix, Timothy, Garry and Listya is my old friend from the last Senior High school. From my faculty I have got new friends too. Fimo, Dion and many more. We were look  like a family, because we like to tell jokes together or go to the nice place in Surabaya. We had a trip together on Malang. It was fun.

How about your people around you ?

1 komentar:

  1. Hello Christ Tio, your writing is so inspiring.
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    Please pay attention with the tenses form too. There must be a word "have" before using past participle.
    And pay attention with the sequence. You put "second" without the "first". Moreover you have to choose better conjunction for your story.
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